My narrative

 This week we were learning to use narratives.We had to write a story bast on a little film called Rocketeer.My story was called gold man and the story was about a robbery and the police were chasing the robbers but there was a kid in the way and then the gold man saved him and captured the robber.It was hard to think of a name for the Rocketeer story.It was easy to write the rest of the story.

Here is the story

It was a day like any other.The cloudless blue sky hovered above as the sun shone down.Dust flicked over the dry dirt while jimmy sped up and down the road spinning his wooden toy aeroplane in the air.He pushed his square glasses back up his nose and he looked up at the spitfire roaring overhead.Suddenly he saw red and blue light flickering in the sky.It was then he realized a robbery had happened at the bank and the police were chasing the robbers.Suddenly the robbers car smashed through a brick wall and was heading right towards jimmy.Jimmy's mother screamed loudly.As the car was getting closer a tall gold figger flew by and swoops down and saved jimmy at the last second.The figger put jimmy down and flew to fight the robber.The robber stopped at a farm and ran inside.He punched the robber in the jaw but the robber clicked it back into place and punched gold man ito the chicken coop.He got back up and flew into the air and smashed through the window and knocked the robber out and the police took him to jail.