Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, November 18, 2021

Spy fox

 This week we had to write a story about spy fox and how he save the world from dr Hammer and his army of sardines.First we watched the video and then we started writing the story with our own beginning or we could start our story with the starting that came with the sheet.After I used some of the beginning I wrote the rest of the story and then I had to peer asses with my friend braden.It was hard to write the story.It was easy to put good words like clenched.

Here is the story.

All is peaceful on the southern ocean as the penguins relax on their icebergs.That is until Dr Hammer and his evil sardines decide to test their weapon of mass destruction.Once the weapon is unleaded their is only one person to save the world and that was fox, spy fox.He embarks on a mission to save the world bat  ends up fighting for the life on a lovely lily.Lily was trapped in a bid metal claw clenching around her wast.With his flintknock he tries to save lily but dr Hammers little minions jumped on him but he gets back up and grab his flintknock and shoots the big metal chomping shark in the eyes and saved lily.He ran to the big red buttons and pressed the big big red button but it changed the target to the laboratory and spy fox and lily ran outside and saved the world from disarter and dr Hammer was finnally defeated and after lily and spy fox went on a date.

Friday, November 5, 2021

My narrative

 This week we were learning to use narratives.We had to write a story bast on a little film called Rocketeer.My story was called gold man and the story was about a robbery and the police were chasing the robbers but there was a kid in the way and then the gold man saved him and captured the robber.It was hard to think of a name for the Rocketeer story.It was easy to write the rest of the story.

Here is the story

It was a day like any other.The cloudless blue sky hovered above as the sun shone down.Dust flicked over the dry dirt while jimmy sped up and down the road spinning his wooden toy aeroplane in the air.He pushed his square glasses back up his nose and he looked up at the spitfire roaring overhead.Suddenly he saw red and blue light flickering in the sky.It was then he realized a robbery had happened at the bank and the police were chasing the robbers.Suddenly the robbers car smashed through a brick wall and was heading right towards jimmy.Jimmy's mother screamed loudly.As the car was getting closer a tall gold figger flew by and swoops down and saved jimmy at the last second.The figger put jimmy down and flew to fight the robber.The robber stopped at a farm and ran inside.He punched the robber in the jaw but the robber clicked it back into place and punched gold man ito the chicken coop.He got back up and flew into the air and smashed through the window and knocked the robber out and the police took him to jail.

Friday, September 24, 2021

My speech

 This week we had to make a speech to say in front of the whole class.First we had to make the brainstorm for the speech on what topic it was on.Secondly we had to show our teacher to see if we can print it and then cut it out and put it on cardboard.Then we had to practice it over the weekend and then on monday we had to say our speech in front of the class and if we got a high score we would go into the semi finals and say it in front of all the seniors.

Here is my speech.


 

Tuesday, September 14, 2021

Mr wolf is innocent

 Today I had to write a story on why the big bad wolf is not guilty.First I did the firstly the I did secondly and last I did finally.it was hard to think of why he was not  guilty.It was easy to write.My digital learning object shows I can write a story about why the big bad wolf is not guilty.

Friday, September 10, 2021

Is the big bad wolf guilty

 Today we were learning about how to plan perswayfis writing.So first we had to read a boom and then we had to watch two videos.After we started on the writing on a slides about if the big bad wolf was guilty or innocent.It was hard to think of reasons that the wolf was innocent.It was easy to write down why we was guilty.My digital learning object shows I can make a perswayfis writing.Next time I will change why the wolf is guilty.

Monday, September 6, 2021

Dogs are better than cats

 Today I had to do a task were we had to say which was better dogs or cats.I chose dogs and the resen is down below.First I put why you shouldn't have a cat and then why you should have a dog.It was hard to think of why you shouldn't have a cat.It was east to say why you should have a dog.My digital learning object shows I can say why dogs are better than cats.Next time I will do cats.

Sunday, September 5, 2021

Fathers day

 Today I made a father's day card and I put a cake and balloons.First I put the happy fathers day and then my name which meant it was from me.It was hard to think of what to write.It was easy to make the block letters and colour them in.My digital learning object shows I can make a father's day card. Next time I will put more colours.


Thursday, August 26, 2021

Writing

 Today I was doing writing and It was about life in a bubble.I did a little bit because it's hard to think of stuff.We had to say something about lockdown in the alphabet.It was hard to think of words.It was easy to think of stuff like b for baking or g for gardening. 




Wednesday, August 25, 2021

Composting

 This week for writing we had to write about composting and how it works.First I had to watch a video and then read two books.After I did my brainstorm then my story.I found it hard to find the info.It was easy to write and remember most of the info.My digital learning object shows I can do a report writing.


Did you know that composting is environmentally friendly


Compost is leftover greens and browns. Browns are dead leaves, sawdust and straw.The greens are veg and fruit like a banana and broccoli.


You get a big or small bin and then you make holes in it and then you put the greens and browns into layers.Then you will start to get small bugs that start to eat the compost.


The benefits for composting is that your garden will smell good and you will have healthy and well grown plants.It also helps our planet be healthy.


Did you know that if you are composting right your garden will smell nice.

Thursday, August 19, 2021

My writing

 This week for writing we were learning about an author and I chose david walliams because that's the name of my writing group and I like david walliams.First we did his facts like when he was born and were, then we did what he was famous for, then his childhood after that we did adulthood and last we did more facts.I found it easy to find out what he was famous for and why. I found it tricky to find out his childhood because not much of his childhood was on the internet.

David walliams

Born:London

Date of birth:20 August 1971

Name:David walliams

David walliams was famous for writing books and for having his own cartoon and movie show called mash and peas.He's also famous for going to the americas got talent.

david walliams wrote his first book when he was 12 years old and his book was called the boy in the dress and in the book there was lots of gross out jokes.When he was little his favourite sport was soccer.

David walliams was married to lara stone and his sister was julie walliams and his son was alfred walliams, His two latest book were mega monster and slim.he also write 32 more books and here's the link.

Here are some facts

1.David walliams went to collingwood boys school. 2. at age 24 david walliams write the ant and dec show. 3. david walliams wrote 54 books. 4. david walliams was a judge in the america got talent.

Thursday, August 12, 2021

My writing

 This week for writing I wrote about Khris Middleton because we had to write about an athlete form around the world that went to the olympics.First i wanted to pick lebron james because he inspired me to play basketball but lebron james didn't go to the olympics.So I had to pick a different person and I pick Khris Middleton because he also plays basketball.I found it easy to pick a person and write about his live.It was hard to find out about his career because there wasn't lots of info on his profile.

Here is the writing.


Khris Middleton

Name:Khris Middleton 

Sport:Basketball

Place of birth:America

Born:12 August 1991

Khris Middleton went to his first olympics in 2021 at tokyo.Khris Middleton was 29 year old when he went to his first olympics. Khris weighed 101 kgs and was 2.01m tall.

Khris went to texas A and M University.Khris has an older sister named Brittney and a cousin named Josh Powell.Khris Middleton played for the Milwaukee basketball team

Khris Middleton won his first gold medal for winning the men's tournament basketball in tokyo. Khris has 9 years experience of basketball.Khris Middleton startec playing basketball in 13 of July 2013.Khris has been in the NBA team for 29 years.

On January 31 2019 Khris Middleton was named an eastern conference All-star reserve thus earning his first All-Star selection.

Friday, July 30, 2021

My writing

 This week for writing I wrote about a black panther.First we had to write notes down on our brainstorm and the we had to write our story with paragraph and a title with a wow fact at the end.the first paragraph was what family it belongs to,the second was what it look like,third was were they lived and last was what it ate and last was the wow fact.I found it easy to write the story but I found it hard to find the perfect fact and information.Here is my writing.


Black Panthers

The black panther belongs to the big cat family.

Black panthers have long sharp teeth and long claws to climb trees.Their body id coated with a black layer of hair and they have shiny green eyes.The also have pink paws and a long soft black tail.

Black panthers eat deer, Wild hogs and boars.Sometimes they eat small animals like rabbits, dogs, birds and fish.

Black panthers live in the southern part of Africa and Asia.Sometimes you can find them in giant wild parks.

Did you know that black panthers have a bite force of 100kgs?


 


Thursday, June 17, 2021

Why do giraffes have purple tongues


This week for writing we were learning to use a diagram in are writing so I chose a topic and I started to write and my topic.It ended up being why do giraffes have  purple tongues  and when were finished we had to peer assess with a buddy.I found it easy to come up with a topic and brainstorm it but I found it challenging to find a diagram. This is my story and diagram I used,       

Giraffes use their tongues to eat leaves all around thorns. The giraffe's tongue wraps around the branch and the leafs stick to the giraffe's tongue and the thorns don't hurt the giraffe's tongue.Their tongue works like a squishy object and is basically imoun to the thorns.A giraffe’s tongue has a ability to to grasp which mean it can stretch 18 inches to 20 inches.Giraffes have purple tongues so they can eat leaves around thorns.  

 


Sunday, November 22, 2020

Nau mai, haere mai

Nau mai, haere mai!

Welcome to my blog for learning.

I look forward to sharing my learning with my school,

my whānau and friends everywhere.